Friday, June 3, 2011

What Lily and Jake Had to Say *continued*

     I walked back to the classroom, and nothing changed. Stares, and looks is what I got. Cindy Lou, one of the prettiest girls in the grade, looked at me in the eyes. I didn't know if she wanted to laugh at me, or if she felt bad. She was always known for being stuck up. I couldn't hate her, cause we've never talked before, but I cherished her light brown eyes. She had the eyes that I've always wanted, the ones that stuck out with a tint of eyeliner.
     I went and sat back down in my seat in the corner. I absolutely hated the yellow desk, that held nothing but my one book. Mrs. Colin went on talking about the revolutionary war, and I could care less about it. They teach us the same thing over and over again, and expect us to care. I laid my head upon my sweatshirt, that I've owned nearly since I was 7 years old.
     The bell rang, and I went to go get lunch. Emily wasn't there, so I sat alone at the picnic table. I watched the boys play basketball, and chase the ball around on the courts. I wanted to ask them to play, but they'd probably say no, and I didnt want the embarrassment. Instead, I sat there eating my apple and watched the clouds go by. " What if I was cloud? Float on by when things get tough." That'd be the day I thought to myself.
     I got up, walked to the trashcan, and made my way back to the school.

*to be continued.*

5 comments:

  1. Hii. I like your story and how this chick gets distracted easily and talks about her sweatshirt and what not. It makes me feel like I know her. I wonder what will happen next. I wish I could read more. Yannoooo

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  2. I liked the last sentence a lot when she was wondering what happens if she were a cloud. I wonder how the rest of her day goes and i wish i could read more.

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  3. I love this story! Kelcie I love how you were so descriptive with this story! I can't wait to read more. I wonder what will happen to her next. I wish you could've written more. Your stories are great and I hope you continue writing. (:

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  4. I really like this...... it seems so real because things like this really happen. I wish i could have read more. I wonder what next week will be like.

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  5. Kelcie I love your story! It makes me smile because of how good it is. I wonder what the ending will be like! I wish I could read more :)

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